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<title>Gold Commuter — P24 Cartoon Desk</title>
<meta name="description" content="Original P24 editorial cartoon in classic editorial-ink style: motorists circle a toll bridge all night on a treadmill of asphalt, chasing 'Gold Commuter' status." />
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<svg viewBox="0 0 900 620" role="img" aria-label="A toll booth sits at the hub of a giant hamster-wheel of bridge asphalt turning in the night; exhausted cars trudge around and around it chasing a dangling gold 'GOLD TIER' carrot, headlights tracing an endless loop under a crescent moon.">
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<div class="cap"><span class="q">“Three more laps to Gold, honey. Then we can afford the toll.”</span></div>
<div class="sub">P24 Cartoon Desk · in classic editorial-ink style (device: the doomed loop) · on the Ashtabula story “Drivers Circling Toll Bridge Overnight to Reach Gold Commuter Tier.” Invented satire.</div>
<div class="back"><a href="index.html">← Back to the Cartoon Desk</a> · <a href="reference/index.html">the editorial-ink style reference</a></div>
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