round3 item (7): microcopy — unify to first-person singular (Robert) voice: 'Talk to me', 'I'll be in touch', 'my end' (was mixed me/us); matches hero + JSON-LD Person

a6fa9806de6649efb984d6a03ff119a61bdbe38b · 2026-06-30 04:28:55 -0700 · Steve

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M public/500.html
M public/app.js
M public/index.html

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commit a6fa9806de6649efb984d6a03ff119a61bdbe38b
Author: Steve <steve@designerwallcoverings.com>
Date:   Tue Jun 30 04:28:55 2026 -0700

    round3 item (7): microcopy — unify to first-person singular (Robert) voice: 'Talk to me', 'I'll be in touch', 'my end' (was mixed me/us); matches hero + JSON-LD Person
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 public/500.html   | 2 +-
 public/app.js     | 2 +-
 public/index.html | 2 +-
 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/public/500.html b/public/500.html
index 7a4894f..4625840 100644
--- a/public/500.html
+++ b/public/500.html
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
       <span class="kicker">/ our fault</span>
       <h1 class="sec-h" style="font-size:clamp(56px,18vw,180px); line-height:.85;">500</h1>
       <p class="mono" style="font-weight:700; font-size:20px; margin-bottom:24px;">
-        Something broke on our end. It's not you. Try again in a moment.
+        Something broke on my end. It's not you. Try again in a moment.
       </p>
       <div>
         <a class="cta" href="/">← Back to start</a>
diff --git a/public/app.js b/public/app.js
index 154275f..60a840e 100644
--- a/public/app.js
+++ b/public/app.js
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
         method: 'POST', headers: { 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, body: JSON.stringify(body),
       });
       const j = await r.json();
-      msg.textContent = j.ok ? '✓ Received. We will reach out.' : '✗ ' + (j.error || 'Failed');
+      msg.textContent = j.ok ? "✓ Got it. I'll be in touch." : '✗ ' + (j.error || 'Failed');
       if (j.ok) e.target.reset();
     } catch (_) { msg.textContent = '✗ Network error'; }
   });
diff --git a/public/index.html b/public/index.html
index 572b44e..283a6a3 100644
--- a/public/index.html
+++ b/public/index.html
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ MEETING.</h1>
     <!-- contact -->
     <section id="contact">
       <span class="kicker">/ contact</span>
-      <h2 class="sec-h">Talk to us.</h2>
+      <h2 class="sec-h">Talk to me.</h2>
       <div class="contact-wrap">
         <dl class="contact-info" id="contactInfo"></dl>
         <form class="contact-form" id="contactForm">

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